Onaji Yoru (Spanish Cover)

[crisryan]

They aren't parallel to the Japanese lyrics!
How do they not make sense?

[Orenji]

Well, they just... don't. Looking at the English lyrics, I guess you just translated them from Google or something.

Dime que imagine ti en mis sueños
"Dime que te imaginé en mis sueños"
Estas y no te vas

Des que fuiste país mi corazón
"Desde que te fuiste a otro país", maybe?
Ya no puede con este dolor

Dime como estas
Desde que no estas
Deberás como te va?
Here I guess you meant "De veras, ¿cómo te va?"

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Apart from the misspellings, it's like you put Spanish words in a random way and sang them. I don't know where you're from, but I couldn't understand anyone who talked like that in Spanish, lol. And I'm not trolling, trust me! I'm just too perfectionist when it comes to linguistics.

[crisryan]

I know what your saying, I even know that the grammar isn't completely correct but how often is grammar consistent even in English lyrics or Japanese lyrics with English。
There‘s sacrifices that need to be made when writing lyrics and I'm not saying my lyrics are perfect at all I'm sure they could use some work。My mom taught me Spanish as a child but I never formally learned written or spoken， just practiced spoken。 Either way I'm open to suggestions I did this in a day because I'm a very busy person！
BTW：I didn't use Google Translate I took a few minutes to translate the meaning because my friend wanted to know what the lyrics were about。

[Lock]

I'm spanish too and same problem here with your spelling. But, I appreciate the effort. Nice job, it's better than expected your cover, IMHO.

Saludos desde Madrid.

[Carlx]

I think the pronunciation/diction is quite good and clear, but it's gramatically wrong at some certain parts, just as Orenji and Lock pointed out.